Would you like to face a great challenge?

 

 

• Put on your thinking cap and think about a detective or mystery story starter.
   
• Write your name on this page and write the story starter under it.
   

A jury will decide which of the posted story starters will be added to the ewatson pbwiki.com so that the rest of the students can choose to finish the story. Enjoy it!

 

 

Julieta Ginevra 6A

Title:The Magic Tree House

 

   Mike and Jane are two brothers.  They were sitting on a bench, in their garden when they saw a light coming out from their tree house.  They ran up to the tree house and when they reached the top they saw a strange door that oppened and a paper came out of it .  Then the door closed and Mike picked up the paper. The paper said that the door from which this paper came out from was a magic door which  only oppened once every 300 years ,but it wasn´t an ordinary door it was a door which took you wherever you were destined to go and  something would happen in that place.  Jane told Mike that she knew where she was destined to go ,to Hollywood where she would act in a mystery movie in which she was going to be the main character ,the detective.  Mike told Jane that it must be probably a disgusting joke of one silly guy.

 

But......was it??or was it serious???But if it was a joke how do you explain the light when the door oppened ,or what about the paper coming out of the the door ,or the door closing??That´s what you have to try and solve,and write about it.

 

 GOOD JULIETA!!! THIS HAS MORE MYSTERY!!! CORRECT THE SPELLING MISTAKES NOW! 29/03

 

 

Agustina Teubal 6A

 

 

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  I was the most well known detective in town.  My name was Detective Peter Anderson.  I was in an art auction because  I loved art, and still more the Modern Art!  They were my favourite paintings.  Now the turn of the modern art came.  I was so excited!  I was prepared to see the most beautiful paintings in my life. 

  The painting that they were going to show next was of Camile Sandor, my favourite artist in the world!  I was very lucky to be there!!  For my surprise, when they uncovered the painting it was all ruined!  It had been painted with black, ugly paint!  I couldn't believe my eyes!  The painting of my favourite artist was ruined!  NOOOO!!  When I saw that, I realised that this was a challenging case to solve!  So I stood up and said "I'm gonna solve this mystery!!"

 

 

Was the painting like that, on purpose, or someone had ruined it??  Why could somebody do that??

Keep on writing and solve the mystery!

 

 

EXCELLENT AGUS!!!! A GOOD CASE TO SOLVE!!!!MISS ALE29/03

 

 

 

Tomas Pinto 6c

Title: Alvaro and the screaming noise

 

 

   I am Tommy.  I have a friend called Alvaro, he is a detective, he has a lot of clients all over the world.  He lives in the U.S.A in the state of Texas.  He is a very tall and thin man, he is like that because he does not eat much. When I saw him he told me stories of his cases and how he resolved them. Last month we met at Sarbuks Cafe and he told me the case he was working on.  All started one night, he was sleeping, it was 5:00 AM when his  phone ringed, he heard some screams all the time until they stopped so he talked to see if there was AN answer but there was not.....

 

 

who were THESE screams FROM? Why was that person screaming? Now you decide how the story finishes.

 

VERY GOOD TOMMY!!! A VERY GOOD START FOR A DETECTIVE CASE!!! MISS ALE-29/03

 

 

Nicole Dassen 6a

Title: The missing sculpture.

 

 

   The museum was full, everybody wanted to come in. But the museum closed the doors, There were many people already inside. A person shouted almost crying, he really wanted to see the sculpture.I was very excited, I was going to see the new sculpture that the museam had found of Michelangelo. Everybody had to enter a room, a big room to see it. People started to get in, there was a sign that said no pictures, so everybody left their cameras in a box. I entered, the room was full of people, and there was a curtain. We waited for everybody to get in. While we were waiting a person said HE would do anythiyng to have that sculpture. I didn't say anything. Suddenly the lights turned off and a person started to talk. He said the sculpture of Michelangelo was carved in 1886. The voice stopped and the curtains went opening, there was a deep silence. The curtains were opened and there was nothing in the middle. I looked beside me, the person wasn't there. The sculture had disappeared. Who had stolen the sculpture?

 

VERY GOOD KIKI! YOU BASED YOUR STORY ON MRS FRANKWEILER'S STORY!! MISS ALE-29/03

 

 

Iñaki Serra 6a

Title: Tomi and the strange calls

 

 

   Tomi was a thief. He had robed A mummie from a museum.  A few days ago he had robbed a collar that said in heroglyphics: "Give back what is not yours." A week ago he was watching horror movies On  TV . Suddenly the phone rang. He answared and a voice said ``Give back my collar! I am going to take it away from you! ´´. Imediatly he hung.  Ten minutes later the same thing happened, the same voice said "Give ME back my collar! I am going two take it away from you", this time the voice was louder .  This happened several times more, each time the voice was stronger. In the last call the mummie was shouting!  Tomi was in panic. His face was white. Suddenly someone knocked ON the door!

 

Was reaLly the mummie who called? Was it an detective? Do you think the mummie knocked ON the door?

Now you decide how the story ends!

 

 

Olivia Barrella 6b

                            Title:  The Missed Call

 

   Claire was an ordinary girl, she was middle aged and studied counsiling and worked at a musium.   One day she recived a call that she uxidentley miss, after that she kept ON reciving those calls FROM the same number, but when she answerd her cell nobody was there.  She felt pretty scared. The next day at the musium, a strange thing was on the wall that said `ANSWER YOUR PHONE´.  She ran to tell the police when she recived a text mesage from that same numer that said `IF YOU TELL THE POLICE I WILL ENTER  YOUR HOUSE AND KILL YOU.´ She ignore the message and went to the police, she showed the message to th police and...

 

Now the end of the story is up to you,  see what happens next, does he kill her?

It`s up to you!

 A GOOD IDEA, OLIVIA

 A GOOD DETECTIVE CASE TO SOLVE. CHECK THE SPELLING MISTAKES AND CORRECT THEM, PLEASE. MISS ALE 29/03

 

Carolina Goldman

 

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   Lisa was a very ugly girl. All the guys at school were paralyzed with her ugliness, but the teacher thought she was a very good influence for the people. Lisa loved the music and he thought the best musician of all was Albert Colters.  The concert of Albert Colters was coming soon and it was all a success!! The concert of Albert Colters was placed in the river stadium.  When the day came and all the people where on the stadium.... there was a last notice, somebody had kidnapped Albert. It's the time for Lisa to come on to popularity, if she would investigate who kidnapped Albert she would be at the   top!!

 

•    Continue the story and tell the audience what happened next

      Did she find him?

       was She popular at the end of the story?

      What happened?

      Put the title you think is appropate to the story!

 

CARO RE READ THIS I BELIEVE IT WAS DONE IN A HURRY! WASN'T IT? RE READ AND CHECK, PLEASE! MISS ALE 31/03

 

 

 

 

 

 

Julieta Iricibar 6B      

 

Naomi  was a very kind girl.  She would always stop to help anyone, or anything that crossed her path.  That is how we have this story, all because she got into trouble for being nice. She was walking down the lane, going to her friend's house, humming a little tune, smiling her little smile, when all of a sudden she saw a burly man lying on the road shouting "Shiver me timbers! I'll get that man if its the last thing I do!"  Naomi rushed over to help, but a nagging voice in her head held her back.  The man looked furious, even maybe dangerous.  Should she go and help him? What if it was a trap?  Lots of men didn't like her because she was "too happy"  What should she do????

 GOOD JULIETA. MISS ALE

 

Marcos Tedin 6 c

 

James was a young boy that lived in Scotland, his mother and father died climbing. Now he was in a boarding school that was very old and rusty. He met new friends but there was one who was extremely mean and hated James. One day in the sports competition that included  shooting, Swimming and running the mean boy started to cheat and his father was so mad he yelled and punched him. So there he started to suspect about the mean boy  because rummors said he was doing an : ""EVIL PLAN"". So one day he went to the mansion and he found the brother that had died trying to go to that mansion, because not even animals could enter. So there strange things happened and his uncle died just about when he heard: "" COME, ON JAMES, YOU CAN DO IT"" And then strange things happen in the mansion. How could he save Scotland from the evil plan?

 

GOOD MARCOS- MISS ALE