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THE PRECIOUS JEWEL

One day I was going to a jewel shop to buy my wedding ring. I was VERY excited.  My name is Kate and my future husband is called Ray.  I loved Ray.  He was handsome, A REAL gentleman and very funny.  When we entered the shop there were two policemEn on each side of the door.  I didn't know what ring to choose.  There was a ring with a pearl, a dimond ring,  a ruby ring, a white ring, you had every type of ring in that shop.  It was the biggest shop in town. Finally, I chose one.  It was the nicest ring in the world.  The ring was with small diamonds and in the center of the ring there was a pearl. I reserved the ring  because it was expensive so I left the shop and went to the bank to fetch money.

When I entered  the bank I heard strange noises. I decided to go outside to see what was happening, I saw cops and police cars. I didn't know what was happening. I asked one cop what had happened.  The police told me that a man had robbed a ring.  The police man said it was the nicest ring in the world.I asked the police if I could enter  the shop and find out what ring the thief had robbed.  When I entered  the shop, I discovered that my ring had been robbed. Tears fell through my cheek. It was my dreamt ring.Now my dream had gone away. I left the shop  and I went home.

When I got home I put my pajamas and went to sleep. I was exhausted!  The next day I woke up and Ray was waiting in the kitchen with something hidden on his back.  He said that he had a surprise for me.  He handed me a small, blue box covered with a soft cloth.  It was a ring box.  I started screaming and I started jumping. I was very happy.  I asked Ray why he had the ring. He answered that the police had discovered the thief and given back the ring. So he bought it and the next day it was the wedding day. It was the best day of my life.

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