The Double Crime Distraction
Frank (WHO IS FRANK????) got to the scene of the crime. He met Martha, the owner of the café. Martha told him that she had only heard a shot but hadn’t seen the crime. Frank observed the dead body. He realized some footprints in front of Mugsy Morrow. He also observed that the murderer had slipped and leaned with his hand on the wall. So the murderer might have just got to shoot Mugsy Morrow. Frank explained to Martha in detail what he deduced about what had happened in the café. Frank asked Martha the bill from the seat the footprints came from. The bill said that he bought a café that cost $7, a toast that cost $3 and a packet of cigarettes that cost $8. The final cost he paid was of $18. At the bottom of the bill it said the name of the murderer, Donald Dixie.
Immediately after, Frank went to the police station to discover where Donald Dixie lived. The address was Clive Road 230. Frank got his car and went to Donald Dixie’s house. He searched the house impatiently to look for a clue. The last place of the house that he searched was his desk. He started looking at everything that was there in a rush. Frank noticed a particular letter. He grabbed it and opened it. Frank couldn’t read it because it had special codes. Frank got to the car and went to the laboratory. When he arrived to the laboratory he analyzed the letter. He put the letter on some lasers to identify if there was another letter inside. He saw a paper inside these two papers. He took out the papers carefully. Inside the papers there were symbols and underneath there were the letters. The letter said, “Let’s meet in a abandoned factory near the bank”. Frank informed the police so they were going to go to the factory.
The next day the police went to the factory and searched for Donald but they didn’t see anything. The police discovered a letter that said “we tricked you; we are in the bank”. The police phoned Frank and told him that the criminal was in the bank. Frank went with fifteen policemen. So they entered the bank without letting the criminal notice it. They heard Donald say to his assistant Edgard: “we have distracted the police”. Edgard replied “yes we are genius”. They had $1000000000 but just when they were about to escape Frank and the police entered and arrested them.
The next day the policemen and Frank went to the cemetery of Mugsy Moorow. YOU HAD TO RE WRITE AND EXPAND THIS FINAL PART, THE ENDING IS TOO ABRUPT!!! PLEASE RECONSIDER!
MISS ALE- MAY 11TH
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