EXERCISE: Invent the title and finish the Story: A VERY INTELIGENT RED HEARRING

John discovered that in his pocket there was a gun when he took it out  a lot of flashes of some cameras and police man appeared ready to ask him questions about a "crime he had comited". Beside him there was a man called Christofer Green that was crying for help the gun a lot of flashes of (PLEASE MAKE IT CLEAR).

        The truth was, that the man was crying because he was bleding on his head, meanwhile the police man took John to prision.

The days went by until one day a police women appeared with a newspaper. She read a note to the other police man and the prisioners that said that in Manhattan Sr. Michael Torton had the same situation as John, but this time Sr. Torton was accused by a woman called Lucinda. Now Lucinda was going to prision. When the police women read this, the other police man suggested to his partners to have a talk with the two criminals, Mr.Torton and Christopher Green in Manhattan, where the second case had taken place.

        When they got to Manhattan the only man who was there was Christopher Green, Lucinda, John and the police man. The hours passed and Sr.Torton wasn´t there. So they decided to go on with the mitting, after Sr. Green had finished talking it was Lucinda´s turn but the onley thing she said was that she was innocent. When she said this Sr.Green started to shout at her telling her that she was a red herring and that she was lying, when he said these , a mask fell onto the floor, it had fallen from Sr. Green´s face , when they looked at him they dicoverd it was a very known criminal called Michael Kolly who, at Boston had promised that he would pay a certain amount of money instead of going to jail, so he decided to steal John´s  and Lucinda´s money. Now that all these was solved they took Michael Colley to jail for the rest of his life. John went back to Boston,where he married Lucinda.

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