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Daphy E
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THE GOLDEN COIN
When you go to the mall to relax yourself, passing near the jewellery store you see Mr.Terrie's girl friend that had once been a friend of yours, talking with the man at the shop. He was a tall man, he was wearing a black hat and a black CLOAK, the man had a strange face which could not be seen very well, because of the hat that covered a quarter of his face. You enter the jewellery store doing as if you had no idea they were there, she looked to the sides trying todessimulate,but when you turn your face they were gone. You don't know how they got out of the store, you didn't see any exit apart FROM the one you were looking at.
Next day you wake up, and you call Lancy, your detective to inform her about what you had seen in the mall, she tells you she meets you in the cafeteria and you agree. So at midday you meet her in the cafeteria and she tells you that she has just talked with a very nice girl called Mirta, who has BEEN working FOR MANY years with gold, coins and all that stuff, and would like to work with you and help you solve the mystery . You tell Lancy the you would love Mirta to help in the mystery.
After having lunch you and Lancy go to the coin store to meet Mirta. When you look at Mirta she seems to be intelligent and a good person, she talks TO you about her experience with this type of mystery, and tells you about the different places she had worked with coins and gold. Finally you tell her she can work with you, and she thanks you. But the only thing you don't undertand is why she had worked in so many places. If she was so good with this kind of things, had she been fired?
In the afternoon when you are in the supermarket you see the same strange man you had already seen in the mall wearing the same cap and hat he was wearing in the mall,he was carrying a bag. Surprised, you go near him but when you realise, he had gone. When you are going home, you turn around and just behind you, you see Mr.Chris (Mr.Terry's assistant ) with a black hat and a bag. You were unconscious (because you were veery nervous) and didn't know what to do, but before you could do or say anything, Mr.Chris took something from his pocket, and that was the last thing you saw.
VERY GOOD IDEAS AND STORY! IS IT FINISHED?? MISS ALE 30/03
Yes it is finished, i did it like this for you to think what had exactly happened. Daphy Estrada 01/04
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