THE GOLDEN COINS

Next morning I woke up and I went to solve the mystery.  My suspects were Mrs Terry and Mr Chris.  But I didn t have evidence to accuse them.  When I arrived to the shop I saw Mr Terry talking with Mrs Terry.  I wonder  what they were talking about.  It look as if Mrs Terry was angry with Mr Terry.  Next Mr Terry told me that he thought that women of the Coin Store had robbed the coins. I ignored him.  At lunch time I saw them fighting again.    So I asked them why they were fighting. And they said they weren t fighting. But I knew that they were hiding something, but didn t know what. 

In the afternoon I went to see the Coin Store and it was all perfect. Two hours later I saw Chris whith a new and very expensive car.  So I asked her where he had taken all that money to buy that car.  She said  that she was planning to buy this car a long time ago.

In the afternoon I received a mysterious phonecall. And it said:"I know who robbed the coins, if you want more information tomorrow leave 1000 pounds in the fifth avenue".

Next morning he left the money.  That afternoon I received  a phonecall of that man.  He told me that Mr Terry  was the thief.  But I don t have enough evidence to accuse him.  That night I met Mr. Terry and I asked him why he had accused the woman of the Coin Store?.  He said that because he was always admiring the golden coins.  So she had to go to jail!!!!!!!!!! In the moment he said that a golden coin fell from his jacket and then another one and another one.  SO Mr and Mrs Terry went to jail for robbing the coins and for accusing an innocent woman.  

Title to the story?? A good start!!! Correct your mistakes and go for more!!! Try to expand your ideas! Miss Ale

very good effort in correcting the mistakes!! MISS ALE-17/04