Felipe Bajas 6b

                                                        The Gold Coin

    Then I decided to go to all the shops of the city to look for the stolen coin.Then when I went to have a coffee I saw a lot of gold coins in a glass. I asked the waiter if those coins belonged to somebody. the waiter told me that the coins were of his own. I explaned him that a golden coin was stolen, and we were looking for the theef. Then he told me that yesterday he bought a golden coin to a lady. So, I asked him if I could buy that coin.  YOU HAVE INCLUDED DIALOGUE WHICH I SAID NOT TO USE)

   Next morning I went to Mr. Terry`s shop and told him that a waiter from the coffe shop had the coin.We went to the coffee shop and we gave the money and we bought the coin. At night Mr. Terry went to his house and he asked his wife why she had a lot of money and why she had a new coat. She told him that she had found money in the street.  Mr.Terry told her she was lying because she had sold the gold coin.  His wife was cought.  (CHECK FOR DIALOGUE)

   Next day his wife went to prision. Me and Mr.Terry had made good friends. Mr Terry went to see his wife every day. On one hand  Mr. Terry wanted to kill his wife but on the oder hand he loved her and thats why every day he visited her with food and presents(RECONSIDER AND RE WRITE). 

 FELIPE IT´S BETTER BUT NOW FOCUS ON CORRECTING THE MISTAKES PLEASE APRIL 15TH MISS ALE

 I did the corrections (felipe bajas)