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Felipe S

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INVENT THE TITLE AND FINISH THE STORY

 

THE STOLEN CELULAR

 

 

 

 

 

 

     That was a bedroom, but whose. Then he heard the door open. It was a girl. Afterwards he woke up in the police station. He didn’t know why, suddenly he touched his pocket, he didn’t feel anything, the police had taken it from him. There was a girl, the girl he had seen before awaking in the police station. The girl told the policeman that he was the one who had stolen it from his father. It was a lie. The girl realized that he noticed that she had put the celular in his pocket and started running. He chased her until the passed a house.... That was the house that he had been trapped when he looked back to the girl he cotinued running after her, I got lost. I went back to the house that I saw when looking for her and entered it, it was the exaclty the same. Suddenly I heard a noise.. it was the girl it was about to kill me with a knife and suddenly...... I woke up. It was all a dream. Then I touched my poket, the celular was still there....... ahhh it was his.

 

 

 Is this finished? A bit short! Miss Ale

 

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GOOD BUT I BELIEVE IT COULD HAVE BEEN LONGER! MISS ALE- 17/04

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