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The missing coin

 

The next day the police went to investigate the place where the coin in the unbreakble jar was. The police knew that the jar was broken with aN explotion because that was the only way to destroy the jar. They inspected the houses and the people of the region but nobody of them had this explosive but they went on looking for the thief.

One day the police saw one person coming into the room where the coin was stolen. The police started questioning him, they said "Where were you yesterday ?" and the man said"I was in the park". The police looked at him and said to him "but why did you go to the park yesterday?"

I went because I was looking for a place where I could buy some fireworks . The police asked him "why did you want fire works". The man said "I don't know why" Suddenly the police shut up and started thinking and some minutes later he shouted "aha!" I got you! You are the one who stole the missing coin because you were looking for fireworks to explode the unbreakable jar. The man went to prision and the police discovered the coin in his house and they recovered the missing coin.

 

 

GOOD BUT  AVOID USING DIALOGUE!! PLEASE. RE READ AND CHECK YOUR MISTAKES. MISS ALE-30/03

 

GODD FRAN. YOU HAVE CHECKED YOUR MISTAKES!!!! MISS ALE- 17/04

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