Mysterious Prints

The next day I saw another print going towards the forest,I knew that Fang was in the forest so I grabed my magnifying glass and followed the foot steps until passing the forest and I saw a little cottage. It seemed now that there was someone there; suddenly I saw the door open. I went in. I just saw a paper saying "I broke the bag." (it seemed that the owner of Fang had eaten it ) nooo I said to myself I could't pass my mark so I went to class.

When I went to my class my mates were sitting down and the teacher was beside an ugly stinky man. She called out my name and said "the mystery?" I didn't know what to say to her " I couldn't find it, " "that's all right because it doesn't mean discovering it , it means to be brave and to think, try to solve it and say the truth ,I'll sum you 5 points more " she said "how do you know ?" I answered back"This man right beside me is the owner of the dog Fang, his dog brought the sandwich to him with your name " she said "and why did it say I broke the bag?" "Oh that was a false clue." said the man . I pass the subject without knowinng the mans name ,and that's how I pass detective cases.

A GOOD START! ! GEORGE. NOW CORRECT THE MISTAKES AND TRY TO MAKE SOME OF THE IDEAS IN A CLEARER WAY! KEEP ON PARTICIPATING! GO FOR MORE! MISS ALE

GEORGE THERE ARE STILL SOME MISTAKES TO CHECK! MISS ALE- APRIL 16TH

Miss ale i am gonna take some time because i have a broble with my computer i 'll try to finish it before friday night.

thank you george p. 16/4