The Precious Jewel

I decided to go for an evening stroll. I walked about three blocks when I felt it, the jewel was in my pocket. I was going to take it out of my pocket to look at it, but I was afraid that someone was near me, ready to turn me in to the police.  I just couldn’t stand it anymore, and I pulled it out of my pocket and looked at it. The shining light it gave off hypnotized me. I just kept staring. I heard it say to me before I lost consciousness “Don’t worry Alexia. I’ll find you and seek you out!”

    I woke up in the hospital room and saw the jewel in my backpack. Then I went home and my mom was furious.  I told her that it was no ordinary jewel that the police took away from me while I was unconscious - it was uncontrollable.

    The jewel should be kept somewhere special, but I didn’t know where. For whoever had it was doomed to death. I knew I had to do something about it, and put it somewhere, but where?

    It was cold and snowy when I went to school the next day. I was suspicious of everyone. Who could I trust? I was looking very carefully to the backpacks but nothing. I tried to forget  about it during class but I couldn´t. When I arrived home there was a letter from my mom saying she was coming later, so I sat in the livingroom and started watching TV. Suddenly the Tv turned off, the windows started opening and closing. I was very scared but the most scary thing was that I saw a face in the window and that's when I panicked, I went running to my bedroom and hid under the bottom of the bed, I felL asleep and after half an hour my mum returned.  I was dizzy and I told her what had happened but she didn´t believe me, she said that it had all been my fantasy. I didn´t want to go on with this conversation so I told her it could be. I was sure that the face I had seen on the window was the one who owned the jewel  now, but I didn´t have any evidence. That night I went to sleep very early. 

              Next day I walked to school and when I was arriving I saw the same face I had seen on the window the night before.  I was very frightened so I rushed to school immediately. That day I felt it was never ending, I met with my best friend at breaktime and she told me someone had stolen her Ipod, so I thought maybe it would be my jewel owner. After school I arrived to my house with my best friend Mary. We were trying to know where the robber lived. Suddenly my dog escaped from my house and we went running after him till we got to an old garage where my dog went in. Mary and I were very scared but we passed there where my dog was and beside it my precious jewel.

                      I felt I was flying on earth, but suddenly the face that had appeared on the window appeared right there beside my jewel, as well as Mary´s Ipod and lots of stolen things. I was very scared, but I thought really quickly. There was a rope. I ran immediately and  looked for the rope I tied  the man and called the police. They took him to prison. The police explained to me that they had given the jewel to my aunt but this robber had killed her and taken the jewel away from her. Now thanks to me the city is under control and there are no more robbers and killers.

A GOOD STORY!! RE READ IT! CHECK THE MISTAKES AND CORRECT THEM, PLEASE. MISS ALE-29/03

 GOOD GINI!!! I REALLY ENJOYED READING YOUR STORY! MISS ALE- 16-04