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John in the Martian planet
From his pocket he took a magnifying glass, he didn’t know why it was there but he left it in his pocket. He didn´t recognize where he was. Next he went out of the room and appeared in a strange city, it looked as if he was in another galaxy. He asked himself many things, for example Why was he in the planet? or Had a martian kidnapped him? These were all questions he couldn’t answer. As he walked about the city he saw some strange people small green people.
Suddenly a martian dressed in some police clothes got him and told him he had to go with him. He took him to a big building in a park. There the martian told him everything. In the planet there was a thief who was stealing everybody. The martians had been watching him through some cameras they had put in the buildings the thief had robbed. He said he was the only human in the entire universe that could help them solve the mystery. Now he was the detective. They showed him videos showing that in the night a martian dressed in black was stealing everything he saw. He started to investigate and he told each store, museum or any place where valuable things could be to contract 2 guards for each entrance but the next day, all the guards in the biggest museum in the town were dead and the museum was almost empty. Now he realized that if the thief could carry so many things he was using a car. Luckily one of the cameras filmed that a big car had gone out from the museum.
He made a plan, in the local bank he would hide 20 cameras to check well who was the thief and the car he used. They also took all the money from the bank so they wouldn´t loose any money. The thief didn’t rob any more for a week. The next week he stole the bank. The plan was perfect. The number plate of the car he used was XDG 904. Now they had to locate the car. John told an officer in the police station to put a guard on each corner of the roads. John saw the car. He told a guard and all the guards came. One of them shot in one of the wheels of the car and the car stopped. Next they caught the thief and took him to jail. John was given a sweet but when he ate it, he felt dizzy and fell asleep. Next he appeared in his house kitchen and everything was normal again.
IÑAKI: WHICH ACTIVITY IS THIS ONE? WHERE ARE THE PARAGRAPHS? THE BEGINNING IS RATHER CONFUSING! PLEASE CHECK, RE READ AND CHECK FOR SPELLING MISTAKES. IT SEEMS TO BE A SCIENCE FICTION STORY WITH A BIT OF MYSTERY STORY-MISS ALE- 31/03
MUCH BETTER IÑAKI!! YOU HAVE DONE A GREAT JOB!!! MISS ALE- 16/04
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