A Rainy Night in New York

Eddie Morino paced the night-time streets of New York, lost amongst his own thoughts. He did not know where he was walking, he just needed to get out and let his mind and legs wander. He peered through the driving rain, which was so common in New York City at this time of year. He noticed the lights of a thousand cars and the colours of hundreds of neon shop signs, bright, in his face. He saw how the images shimmered in the ever-growing puddles at his feet. It was these images that helped him in times like this. He had been working on a case now for two weeks and his clues seemed to have dried up. The reflections in the puddles changed, took on new shapes as people and cars caused the water to ripple. To Eddie, this change, this new angle, helped him look at the facts in a new way. It all began like this.

    One day Eddie Morino whent to the police station because he had a case in which he had BEEN working for two weeks ON AN asesinated woman.It was her wife.When he arrived to the police station the policeMEN told him that the asessinate took place in a supermarket. He went runing to the market and he started to look for clues. He saw blood ON the floor.After that he was walking in the street ,it was a rainy day and he saw in the water that his wife was talking to him and it gives him a clue.

A very good start, Jorge!! Is it finished? Miss Ale

JORGE THIS STORY IS NOT FINISHED!!!! WHAT HAPPENED???MISS ALE- APRIL 17TH

Nothing has been done! Please recheck the mistakes- Miss Ale- May 1st