The Gold Coins

When he got to Claire's house she greeted him in and asked her if he could look around the house too see if everything was ok.  She had no problem but she told him that her bedroom was in a mess.  He started looking around the house he didn't find anything strange or curious.  At last he came to Claire's bedroom and she was right it was in A mess; all the clothes WERE everywhere EVEN  bags, makEup and all sorts of things.  She looked a bit nervous when he got close to the bed. On the shelves of her room were some jars with coins but the coins weren't gold they were silver.  Under her bed THERE were millions and millions of bags, all sorts of bags.  She looked really nervous and afraid.  He asked her if everything was ok and she said yes.  He moved everything and saw a little lid that was half way open.  He looked inside it and saw a tiny little gold box.  He took it out and opened it, inside was the gold coin.  Claire was frightened and didn't know what to do.  She started telling him that she had heard A CONVERSATION about a shop that had gold coins that were of a million dollars  so that's why she moved into the neighbourhood.  She stole it because it was of great value and it could save her family that was poor and sick.  The mystery was solved and the manager of the shop got back the gold coin, bought it and went to hawaii with his girlfriend for Valentine's day.  As for Claire she went to jail because that coin was really important.  They were all happy because the mystery was solved. And everybody lived happily for ever after. (IN YEAR SIX CHOOSE A DIFFERENT TYPE OF ENDING, PLEASE)

VERY GOOD IDEAS, LUCIA!!! NOW GO FOR MORE! MISS ALE