STORY STARTER.

THE GOLD COINS

When I entered Claire´s bedroom I saw a picture of Kelly and Claire when they were small and I asked where they know each other from and she said from school. I was very surprised of what she had told me!

Talking of life´s thing she told me that she had never been in love with her boyfriend and she was with him only because he had one of the most expensive objects of the world. She had pictures in all the parts of the world!I would never imagine that the relationship they had together was so big. Then, when I was looking at the pictures I saw a little round gold thing that was behind a frame of one of the many pictures she had.

I got another picture frame and I wanted to know what was behind. In a moment I couldn´t believe what I was looking at! It was the store´s key.

In a hurry I said go bye to Claire and I went with the key and the gold coin and I went away. I runed so fast that I didn´t feel my legs. When I arrived to the store I saw the manager and I told him of all the clues I had found in Claire´s house and after telling all this I should him the key. I saw that Terry´s face was “coming down”. I could imagine that he was thinking that Kelly never really liked him. I offerd him to go with him to look for the gold coin. On the way to Kelly´s house we saw Kelly and Claire in a Café in a very good mood(laughing, harder and harder).

When we came in the Café Store we saw them,  they were white and  in shock. Clarie´s would have never suspected that I worked with Terry. Terry was very mad at Kelly so they broke-up. We went to the police to denunce Kelly and Claire. After all my help he invited me to Hawai to spend the greatest vacations of my life!

GOOD LULI!! A VERY GOOD DETECTIVE STORY!!! RE READ AND CORRECT THE MISTAKES!! YOU GOT ONE HOUSE POINT!!!

 GOOD WORK LULI! MISS ALE-17/04

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