I(Laura) decided to go for an evening stroll. I walked about three blocks when I felt it, the jewel was in my pocket. I was going to take it out of my pocket to look at it, but I was afraid that someone was near me, ready to turn me in to the police.  I just couldn’t stand it anymore, and I pulled it out of my pocket and looked at it. The shining light it gave off hypnotized me. I just kept staring. I heard it say to me before I lost consciousness “Don’t worry Alexia. I’ll find you and seek you out!”

    I woke up in the hospital room and saw the jewel in my backpack. Then I went home and my mom was furious.  I told her that it was no ordinary jewel that the police took away from me while I was unconscious - it was uncontrollable.

    The jewel should be kept somewhere special, but I didn’t know where. For whoever had it was doomed to death. I knew I had to do something about it, and put it somewhere, but where?

It was cold and snowy when I went to school the next day. I was suspicious of everyone. Who could I trust?  Then I saw mark the (the boy I liked) blinked at her. (I don't understand what the relationship is with the beginning of the story!) 

She didn’t realise now if he had blinked at her or to another person.  But suddenly he started talking to her.  He remembered last night.  She answered no!  What happened? And then she started remembering that last night she had gone with her best friends Emily and Lara.  He also had gone with his two friends Thomas and Lari.  His two most popular friends to be more precise and she had found a golden box that said:  for Lila, with love D.L.  And she had got it and put it in her pocket.   It couldn’t 

Be Mark talking to her and not to the “jealous sisters” (like that she, Emily and Lara had put them, as the nickname says they are very jealous).  Mark continued talking and asked “Are you all right after you found the jewel and the note that said that the jewel was uncontrollable you collapsed I had to take you to the hospital.  Yes I am all right and you I can be really heavy.  Oh no replied mark you are really light. (The bell rang that meant start of classes).  After a long morning lunch time started. Mark lunched as regularly with the popular ones.  But he seemed really nervous.   Then the afternoon cake it was boring until the bell rang meaning the end of the day and all past much faster.   When she was leaving, on the way back she thought about not having anyone to trust but then remembered him (Mark).  She had to get rid of the jewel.  When I got home I saw a note on my bed that said: “dear Laura. So she hurried up to open it.  The note said:

“My dear Laura you will die if you don’t find a place for the jewel by Saturday I tried to keep it safe for a long time but now I’m not responsible for the trouble it can cause. It is strong so try and make what many people tried to do but it is impossible.

See you soon 

The letters were similar to the ones in the box of the jewel.  Now she remembered that the day she found the jewel someone had pringd her leg and she had to look down that way she saw the box.

Some minuets after the door bell rang it was her friends how invited her to go shopping she went, she wanted to forget about the jewel after a will she forgot about the note. When I went home I had diner, but some thing strange happened when I was doing my home work. A paper plane came in the window; a chill ran thru mi blood I lucked out the window there was a figure similar to mark or was it mark?  So I herd his voice, it defined was mark.  He said come down I want to chat with you!  And don’t tell your mom. Oh I said, okay.  So I went down stairs and told mom I wanted to take the garbage out I did so and saw Mark.  He wanted to know how I was filling I told him that I had resaved a mysterious note but that I was all write.  He asked if I had brought it I remembered that before living I had but it in my pocket so I tuck it out.  He analysed it and said aren’t the same to the ones on the box, oh yes I replied.  I herd a gulp are you afraid I said.  After a long silence and an ever lasting silence I saw he stand up and I herd him say I want to solve the mystery.  I asked are you sour? Oh yes he answered I want to get to the bottom of this. Okay see you tomorrow at school it is getting late so I am going to sleep. It was an ever lasting night.  Next day when mark was going to school he saw in an antic shop a very nice necklace the shop was closed but he decided that after school he would come and see it.  During the way to school he thought to how he could give it to.  After a long day he was going home he passed beside the shop he could see the necklace in the shop window it was very nice it had golden flours.  He entered the shop and so a little old man behind the counter he asked him how much dose the necklace cost.  An answer came immediately you can take it free sins I found it bad luck cake with it Mark asked and how did you find it.  I found it when I was your age, a summer holiday I was in the mansion with my to best friends sins then I had bad luck. A and here you have the box take it also come with the necklace.  He got it and ran home he had made a decision on the carnival on Friday he would give it to Laura he didn’t know why he had made that decision.      

 BETTER MAGDALENA! A VERY BIG EFFORT! MISS ALE-17/04