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 The mysteries of the secret factory 

 

John didn't know where he was. He looked out of the window, but nothing seemed familiar. The room was strange too. He didn't recognise any of the furniture. And his clothes, although they were a good fit, surely didn't belong to him? He'd never had a yellow shirt. Or a brown check jacket.

   As he sat on the padded wooden stool trying to puzzle out answers to all these questions, he slowly became aware of something in the back pocket of his trousers. Something hard. He put his hand in his pocket and pulled it out. It was a black knife. He cut the rope that tied him and ran out of the room. He saw a big machine like the one for making templetes for the swiss army knifes and he saw a man running to catch him so he ran, he ran as fast as  he could.

  As he was running saw many rooms with prisoners. He whent in a corredor an noticed it had no door so he was traped. the man came running after him and caught him. The man told him that he wouldent take him to the people  who catched him and that he was a friend. They whent out of the building, there was a sign that said: THE SWISS ARMY FACTORY. The man told him that it was a factory for making the swiss army knifes to sell them to terrorist groups. the man said his name, it was Marc he was a detective from the C.I.A. he was here to solve this probem and put the responsable and his followers in prison. They whent to the back door but there were guards in the entrance, they threw a sleeping granade and pased through the sleeping guards. They camein a big corredor with lots of rooms. Marc said it was in the fifth room were they were soposed to be so they whent in and two big guards traped them and tied them to  a chair each.

   Tom was a kid that loved to read, specialy mysteri storyes he dreamed to once in his life be a detective as his father. Tom was Marc´s son, Marc said to Tom that he was on a mysteri and that he would be back on two days but he was taking three days so Tom was a bit nervous. He foned a friend that had a father that was working on that micion to so that they would have their first micion. they whent to the C.I.A. to tell them that their fathers were missing and they said that they would go but with three more agents so they wouldn´t be alone. they whent to the factory were their fathers were and  whent in. They came into a big corredor with lots of drawings of machines a that sort of things folowed by some old fotos. They came into a room were they fownd Tom's friend's father who told them were Marc was. They whent to that room and fownd that he wasn't there.

 

 

MARTIN IS THIS STORY FINISHED??? CORRECT THE MISTAKES. CAPITAL LETTERS- FULL STOPS- THANK YOU MISS ALE 17/4

 

Nothing has been done- May 1st- Miss Ale

 

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