The Precious Jewel

                  One day I decided to go to THE shop where they sell jewels, to buy a jewel.  I bought it and put it in my pocket.           

                  Then I went walking through the blocks and I thought to get out the jewel because it was preTty, but I thought (if I take it out and somebody seeS me he is going to try and take me my jewel or maybe a police is going to take me to prison.   But that didn't matter it was so prety that I took it out of my pocket The sun-light maDE the jewel preTty so I was there for some minutes seeing the jewel when I heArd that the jewel taked to me.  WHAT DO YOU MEAN??

                 Then I woke up in the hospital, and when I saw my mother she was furious but I told her that that jewel was so shiny and pretty that all the people in the world might be dreaming with that jewel.  So I thought that they had to hide it but where?  The next day when I went to school I was suspicious oF all the people in the school.

MARTIN, GOOD TO SEE YOU WORKING ON EWATSON PBWIKI! RE READ IT, CORRECT THE MISTAKES, EXPAND AND CLARIFY YOUR IDEAS AND DIVIDE THE STORY IN PARAGRAPHS! THANK YOU! MISS ALE-31/03

check the mistakes and expand your ideas- MISS ALE- 17/04