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Martina! Good to see that you have created your page, but please follow instructions!!! Read the text again!! Thank you!keep on participating! I'll be waitng for your answer! See you Miss Ale 12/03/08

 

Invent the title and finish the story:

 

   The Magic Jacket   

 

It was a gun!!! He was confused, his face was white. After the fist gun he put his hand in the pocket and pulledout another gun!!! 

And like 1,000 more guns, he stoped. He fell as sleep. The following morning when he got up, he noticed he was in his home, his mom shouted: John come:down to have breakfast!!!

John was very, but very confused. When he went down he told her mother what had happened and her mother said he was dreaming and that he has to go to sleep early. John said he wasn`t dreaming and all what had happened was true, he broughtdown his jacket and pull out... This time wasn`t a gun, It was a giant elephant!!! Her mother started laughing and she said that, that jacket was magic!!! John started shouting and sayingwith this jacket we will be millonary!!!

They didn`t sold the jacket but they became famous and all the people went to visit them and they werevery happy.Now they have a lot of money because the people have to pay to see the jacket!!!

 

Martina Vanderusten 6C

 

 GOOD! MARTINA, NOW CHECK YOUR MISTAKES! PLEASE! MISS ALE

 

 

 

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