The gold coin

 John didn't know where he was. He looked out of the window, but nothing seemed familiar. The room was strange too. He didn't recognise any of the furniture. And his clothes, although they were a good fit, surely didn't belong to him? He'd never had a yellow shirt. Or a brown check jacket.

   As he sat on the padded wooden stool trying to puzzle out answers to all these questions, he slowly became aware of something in the back pocket of his trousers. Something hard. He put his hand in his pocket and pulled it out.

It was a gold coin! he thought, hoos was? , yes jonis coin!! He had showed to me. I will tacke it to him. When he was walkin to jonis ofice some one with a mask took the him the coin from  his hands  .  10 minutes later he caled a detective. The detective came the before posible, and asked: what hapened?!! someone stold me jonis gold coin.Who is Joni?  The detective suggest the man to go and say joni.  Because Joni would be desapointed.  Yes its a good idea.  Helow joni, Helow, said joni, I need to tel you something, what,I found your gold coin in my pocket, but how said Joni, I don t know.  The detective saw the eticket of the pant and it said walter s property. The detective thaught and said yes, walter stold the coin so you confuce and got his pants so he robed again, said the detective.  They went to look to walter, walter worked in his company, they arribed an asked emideatly, did you stold Jonis gold coin, yes but don t tel the police ok but if you giv ous the coin.  Yas sure.  Finaly every one went to his work again.        

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MATIAS  WHAT YOU HAVE WRITEN SHOWS VERY LITTLE COMMITMENT. I BELIEVE IT IS VERY SHORT. THE TITLE IS MISSING. CHECK SPELLING MISTAKES, STRUCTURES, PUNCTUATION IN DIALOGUES. IT CANNOT BE CONSIDERED A STORY. MORE EFFORT IS NEEDED. MISS ALE. APRIL 15TH