The case of the missing coins.

I asked her if she could show me her home. She said that no problem, we go. Then she told me she loveD collecting jars as coins, I stare to a jar with a mark that said¨Proper  y   f   he      eum¨ it was all rubbed up. I asked what was that, she said that it doesn´t  matter. After that she show me her coin colection it was really beautiful suddenly Clarie desapear, a strange smell was in the room. I tried to open the door but it was closed with key. it feeld lke if my lungs  were burning, I feel sleepy and dazy.(CHECK THESE SENTENCES.SPELLING , MAKE IDEAS CLEARER) I felt assleep. Whn I woke up I was in the coin shop all alone. I stod up and I saw a letter it said that they would  never  see that coin again at less that they let 999.999 dololars in the bin of  2nd street and 5th street . We had a plan, We would ledave that in the bin  and they would be waiting in that place  and when a person go to  they would arrest him. They go they arrested them they said it all. Mr Terry had pay them to make desapear the coin  so he would have the coim andthey woud divide the money. Then thety tell us that Clarie  was too in the plan. After hearing all this things we went to the coin shop and it was Mr.Terry  dead in the floor, Clarie had killed him said a letter. Then Clarie apeared with a gun and she tried to shoot , there were no more bullets  we send it to the jail of alcatraz , she was dangerous,

PLEASE RECONSIDER AND RE WRITE TAKE YOUR TIME AND GIVE IT A THOUGHT- MAKE SHORT AND CLEARER SENTENCES! MISS ALE-17/04

Max What happened??? Tomorrow is the due date and the story is not finished!!!! Mis Ale 10/04

 I corrected it , I hope it is good.

I asked her if she could show me her coin collection, she said that no problem. We went to her apartament. She opened a door and there were all kinds of coins, small,big,medium,golden or metalic.All the types of coins you can imagine. She told me all the stories of like that coins went to her hands.

After that I saw that there it was a jar, a nice jar just like the one of the museum. I said in a large tone that that was the jar of the museum. Clarie shoutes ¨Carl¨.Then a big man appaered and bump me , they nok me.Then when I remember all the things,I start smelling a strange smell, it maked me sleepy.I got asleep. When I woke up I  was in the in a bar ,alone, all alone.I went out , I saw lots of persons with cameras they start asking me things.I didn´t know what they weretalking about. I saw the police they told me that Mr Terry was dead,in the coin floor. I get impressed, I went to see to Mr Terry, beside  it was a letter.It saids go to 12th street, and leave 100.000.000 dolars in the bin.

I had a good plan, we would go to the 12th street and we woudl wait hide untill someone takes the money. A person passed, he take the money, the police stoped him, we saw that it was clarie. 

We descovry a very dangerous person.