GOLD COINS
I asked her" which was the last coin she got?"
Claire said, "that one", she pointed to one of the gold coins.
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Where did you get it?" I asked,
"That man in that house over there, he gave it to me, he is always wearing black and he never is in his house".
"Ok ,thank you for answering all my cuestion"
When I was on the street I saw that man s house, I said to myself:I should go inside and look for a clue to know where he is right now. I get him and I take him to prison.(RE WRITE PROPERLY ADDING SPEECH MARKS IF YOU HAVE USED DIALOGUE)
So I went inside and there I saw all his investigations, but there was something that caught my attention. It was a letter that he had received from one of his friends, it said: meet me in the dinning café at 12 o clock. It was 11:45, I still had time.
I went as fast as I could, when I got there it was 12:05, It was full of people, but then I saw the man in black , he was with another man . I couldn’t see his face, his face was too dark. I called about 10 policemen for them to come and catch the robber, I went and I took out his hood to see his face, it was Mr. Chris, the robber of the coin. In that instant all the TEN policemen I had called came AND they arrested Mr. Chris and the other man. Mr. Terry had his coin back and everybody was happy
GOOD TO SEE YOU WORKING ON EWATSON PB WIKI. NOW GO FOR MORE!! MISS ALE 30/3
MAX YOU HAVEN´T CHECKED AND CORRECTED WHAT I HAVE MARKED TWO WEEKS AGO. PLEASE DO SO! MISS ALE APRIL 15TH
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