StorY Starters

The Mystery of The Missing Lunch

         I kept looking for the teacher's lunch. Suddenly a bush started to move I was very happy because I thought it was the teacher's lunch. I ran to that bush to see what it was, when I got closer a boy who was on the bush started running AFTER a rabbit. The teacher's food was not there and I started feeling another boy would get it first. But I kept ON looking for the teacher's lunch, I started walking when I saw something beside a tree. I started running to where the tree was BUT when I got there I saw, that it was a white cat resting. I started feeling hungry. I started going back to the dining room. When I was going to open the dinning room door I heard a boy crYing "I found it" "I found it". When I heard that I ran to see If he HAD really found it. A boy told me it was a joke, he didn't find it. In that moment I saw it near the playground there was the teacher's lunch. It was amazing I found the teacher's lunch. I ran to the dining room and I gave the teacher her lunch. She gave me a kiss and I ran to tell my friends.

GOOD NICO!! RE READ AND CORRECT THE MISTAKES!!! MISS ALE.30/03

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VERY GOOD!!! NICO!!!!YOU HAVE CHECKED YOUR MISTAKES !!!!!MISS ALE 17/04