Story  Starter                                                             A crazy dream

...He continued touching that black hard thing ,  and he discovered that it was an ordinary  rock wHich he HAD found THE PREVIOUS  night at the fair. Suddenly he saw a white paper that said;¨hello you people , message from moon alien I am¨, he read it over and over AGAIN, so if he could find a result for what he was seeing.  He felt uneasy, and  a bit scared,   maybe THOSE  aliens were big monsters that wanted to take HIS  blood 

and make a smoothie with it . 

    He grabbed the phone and decided to call 911 , when her mother told him  that it was time for dinner.  He wanted to tell everything to his  mom ,  so he decided to go to the dining room ,  this time he was happy with the change because this wasn´t his house, but a huge mansion like the ones in the muvies  .  it was so cool , but a strange  voice came out of his voice , this time he wasn´t surprized after so many changes. He looked for stairs but he only  saw an elevator.  Happily he went into it and he saw 10 floors!!!!!!!!!! and some other buttons with weird signs  he didn´t pay atention to them ,  after all his mind was occupIED with other things like THE  10 FLOORS!!!!!! ,   for his luck each button said everything the floor had had.  So he pressed floor 3 where the dinning  room was and enyoyed  the mini ride on THE elevator. When it finished he remembered that he was another person and that  his mother would notice it AND would think he was another person that was part of a diabolic plan also  he  wanted to confuse her BY saying it was John  so that she couldn't realize.  HIS mom was a little bit obsessed with crimes,  because she was a lawyer.  John  decided to cover HIMself with a sweater   and so he  went to the kitchen acting as if HE had nothing on his  face.  As soon as HE got to the dining room , Jhon's  mother looked surpriced .  she peeked into the hole he left on his eyes and took  the sweater off him . Jhon shut his eyes and muved one step backward  to hear his mother  big "aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh",  but nothing went out of his mother's mouth , but a "what did you think when you put that sweater on" . Jhon looked surpriced,  but he didn't want to say anything to his mom, SO he went back to his room. After having dinner he started to investigate the rock.  He hided it In his safe box and went on with his weird life .  Nobody reacted at his new appearance. 

One day he woke up ,  because he felt something warm around his body.  After that he heared the shouting of his mother telling him that there was a fire.  He looked for the stairs,  but he couldn't find any.  And the elavator was dangerous with fire .  He decided to yell for his mom . But he didn,t hear any  reply . He started to desesperate . He went on the elavator because it was his only hope he also decided to take the stone with him. He also took a camera . saddenly the elavator became very small,  then hudge. He finnaly get of and runned . He took pictures to the stone and print them.  later he started to talk to it. He felt crazy and went to the hospital .

         Later he heard a noise and saw his mother telling Jhon to wake up. He realized that everything was a dream.

PANCHA A LONG STORY!! SOME OF THE IDEAS ARE CONFUSING. WHERE ARE THE PARAGRPHS? RE READ CAREFULLY!! CHECK YOUR MISTAKES AND CORRECT THEM MAKING YOUR IDEAS CLEARER!!! A VERY BIG EFFORT! MISS ALE 29/03

 PANCHA MANY SPELLING MISTAKES, FULL STOPS ARE MISSING. TENSES- RE CHECK PLEASE- MISS ALE- 16/4

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