THEY were drugs !!!! When he noticed, everything came to his memory but not all, something had happened  to him and he didn't remember. Why ? When ? Where ? That questions controlled his head and when he realized he was asleep. He woke up, the next morning, in the same room, but this time people were looking at him, in fact, they were policeman. He sat up and asked where he was, they looked at him, in a strange way, and answered: ' "You're in the police station for having drugs in your house!" John didn't move , he was confused, he tried to remember but it didn't work. He tried to convince the police that he hadn't had drugs in his life. Ssomething had happened to him, that they were making  a mess but the police just ignored him.

When sudenlly an idea came to his head, and said: "If I prove you that I haven't done anything you'll let me free ?" The policeman agreed. Somehow they were sure something was wrong so they trusted him. They went to John's house, this obviously was the true house, and they also went with a detective, they found John's real clotheS behind the bed and they also found lots and lots of drugs with a name, actually  an ADDRESS. John changed to his real clothe and found in his room that there was a clue, a note and it said: If you're the people who are going to buy the drug go to this ADDRESS' It was the same AS IN THE drugs' bag. So there they went !

When they got there, they found it was not a lovely place to live in and a lot of people were getting in the house and going out with drugs . They made as if they were going to buy one and when they were inside they caught them!

When they were in court they confessed that they have been in John's house, put him medicine for him to sleep, change clotheS and put the drugs there !

Finally the mystery was solved and John was finally free !

End !

 GOOD SHANY A VERY GOOD DETECTIVE STORY. NOW RE READ AND CHECK THE MISTAKES AND CORRECT THEM, PLEASE.30/3 MISS ALE

 A VERY MYSTERIOUS STORY!! MISS ALE-17/04

The Gold Coins!

They went to Clari´s house and did not find much. There were gold coins everywhere but not the one they were looking for.  They notice Clary was very interested in this LOST gold coin but she didn´t ask  now. She was thinking of something..... What ? Why? But they were not interested, they JUST had to find it, they just had 3 days for Christmas and Mr. Terry wanted to give it to her Girlfriend. So she called her and asked her where she was.

She said she was at the shopping and  that she would be back in an hour or two. So Mr. Terry and Lancy went to the house to look for the key, they had time. They didnt find the key where it always was, in the closet behind his special coat. He wanted to call her and ask her where it was, but he´ll have to tell her that it was lost and that would be horrible, she loved that coin so much .

Mr. Terry was disappointed, so with Lancy they went back to Clary´s house. Before entering  her room, they heard a conversation, it was Mr. Chris, Mr Terry´s helper.  They heard that Mr. Chris was asking if she liked the coin she had given the previous night.  In that moment everything made sense. They have forgotten that Mr. Chris was Clary´s boyfriend and that they both loved that gold coin and obviosly that they hada shop too, called Margaret.

So they entered the room.  Clary was pale! They both talked and begged them not to call the police, they didn't, they just wanted the gold coin back.

They warned them that next time they would call the police, but this time they were polite. They gave  the gold coin back.

Three days later, in Christmas he gave his girlfriend the gold coin and they went on valentine on a lovely trip.  And the mystery of the gold coins was solved !

End !

A VERY GOOD STORY!!! YOU CAN REALLY BECOME A GOOS DETECTIVE- 17/04- MISS ALE