Story Starter: The Gold Coin

      You keep on looking at the coins for a long time until you see the gold coin! You tell her you have to go and at the moment you leave the house you call the police. You wait very nervous for the police and when they come they kick the door and go inside the house. Clarie starts shouting and asks why the police is in her house. They told her that they had discoverd her, that they new that she had robbed the coin, but she still didn´t know what they were talking about. So they asked her to show them her coin collection. She showed it to the police, and I showed them the gold coin. Claire understood what happened and she said that it wasn´t the gold coin. She took it from its jar and showed it to the police. The police wasn´t sure if that was the gold coin or a similar one, so they took Claire with Mr. Terry. When they arrived to the shop, they showed the coin to Mr. Terry, but he said that wasn´t the coin. So they said sorry to Claire and let her go.

      You go to your house and think about what was going on. Some time later, your detective, Lancy, calls you on the phone. She says she saw something suspicious. She tells you that an employee called Margaret was telling Mr. Terry that she had lost the paper with her name that all the employees have to have to be recognized. Your detective also tells you that she saw something golden that was falling from her pocket. So you go to the coin store and question Margaret. She said that the night the coin was robbed she was at a restaurant with a friend. So they call that friend and ask her what she had done that night and she said that she had gone alone to the cinema. Now everyone knew that she had lied so she could lie again. You remember what your detective, Lancy, told you so you ask her if she could show you her pocket. She says that she has nothing in it but you don´t believe her so you put your hand inside her pocket and take something. It was the coin! The police comes and takes her to prision. You are very happy because you solved a mystery and you go to your house to sleep satisfied.

SOFIA THE IDEAS ARE GREAT BUT THEY NEED TO BE EXPANDED AS TO MAKE A RICHER STORY! THIS CANNOT BE CONSIDERED A STORY!

GIVE IT A TRY AND GO FOR MORE. 30/3 MISS ALE

MUCH BETTER NOW, SOFIA NOW WE CAN CONSIDER IT A STORY- YOU HAVE MADE A REAL EFFORT! MISS ALE-17/04