The Precious Jewel

 I remembered I had my best friend Leila.  I could tell her all.  That was the best idea, when I saw her that morning I ran to see her and  I told her.  At first she couldn't believe it and thought I was crazy and she decided not to listen to me.  I was nervous in class I looked every where, when at once the last thing that I wanted to happen it happened, the teacher asked me what was the matter that word paralyzed me, I started sweating.  I said that everything was fine and there was no need to matter.  The class went on, the time passed very slowly.  When a relief came to me it was brake time bell.  I stood up, and walked out of that class.  When brake time finished and math and language lessons had passed, lunch time came.

  I retold Leila about the jewel several times at a point she believed me.  When school was finished we walked the same way, because we where neighbors.  Two officers stopped  us  I asked why where they stopping us.  (Then a flash came to my head they could be looking for the jewel, and they were not real police officers.)  I got Leila by the hand and told her to run.  When the police officers where far behind us I told Leila about what I thought.  She agreed.

The next morning the same police officers came.  There was no escape.  My mom opened the door.(my family opens the door to anybody and makes them pass.)   They walked in the house and they told her about what had happened at school, and told her that they where police officers from the C.I.A. and wanted to see the jewel (my jewel!).  They said that they had started investigating a mysterious robbery in the central bank and they had just robbed something: it was a diamond.  A big diamond that could concede wishes.(I thought he was talking about my diamond)  the robber fell into the river and given the diamond to a girl.  (that girl was me.) My mother tolled them about my diamond.  They wanted to see it and they would take it to the lab my mother said yes, I said yes but I wanted to know completely the story. They said yes and started telling the story.

 One day two robbers that where Jimmy and Rodney the intelligent was Rodney, wanted to know how the enchanted Jewel, they decided to robed it they phoned the best robbers in history Coin Sucker, one eyed Joe, the street pirate band, air pirates and the hole makers.  After five day of planning they decided to robed on Wednesday.  They where all waiting in a little house in front of the bank.  the house was little with just a little kitchen and a bedroom there where two little windows.  With one of the windows you could see the bank.  Somebody wasn’t there and that was coin sucker, he had robed three banks in four hours.(that makes 1 hour and a 1/4 that’s fast, very fast!)  ´The plan was ruined what could they do when they where no hope there he was like a "hero".  they greeted them in their way with a little punch in the elbow.  They started the plan "the pirate band will talk with the guards, Me and Rodney will go in and assault the bank in that moment one eyed Joe will go with hole maker and coin sucker to rob the money and the air pirate band will rob the rest with the Jewell."  They started the first problem the guards didn't want to talk and went in so Jimmy and Rodney couldn’t get in but the others didn’t knew that and they  continued the plan, there where more guards that arrests them. But Rodney didn't want to fail so went in and assault the bank and the only thing he could get was then Jewell.  Somebody had put the silences alarm Rodney didn't realized he went out and find the police there he started shouting at them and escaped.  It was at knight and couldn't see anything he fell and dropt the Jewell, you got the Jewell.

                                 Now remember (I had completely forgotten about it) I affirmed with my head and ran to fetch it and give it to them.  I gave the Jewell back.  Now several years had past but I still remember it as it had been yesterday.

Check again tenses, spelling and expressing ideas clearly- Miss Ale- May 1st