Story Starters

The Gold Coin

When you finish watching her collections, you see a yellow book that on the cover it said "Coins That I Want" you look at it and you see that it says"Coin of one million dollars from Supercoins", next to it, it has a check mark. You thought of the stolen coin, and the check mark meant that she already had it. When she was about to finish, Claire pulled the book off her hands

Claire: "DON`T READ THAT!"

You thought that it was very suspicious. For more information of the lost coin you ask Claire what her whole name was,

Claire: "My whole name is Claire Margaret."

Then you remembered the paper.

When you got to Supercoins next day you thought that maybe Claire was the one who took the coin. You go back again to her house and Claire opens the door,

Lancy: "Hey I just wanted to know which costume did you use for Halloween?"

Then she takes you to her room again, and the book is still there. And when she choose you the costume you cannot believe it, the costume was all black. You ask to see the coins again and you recognise the gold coin from Supercoins.

Lancy: "go to Supercoins tomorrow with this coin (she was showing the coin she had recognised)."

She agreed and then they went each one to her house to wait for the next day.

The day came Lancy was there first, when Claire arrived and Lancy told her,

Lancy: "I am really sorry to say this but you became a very good friend and I know that you took the missing coin."

Claire was ashamed Lancy was right. Claire had to give back the coin, and then Lancy bought the coin and gave it to Kelly for Christmas.

Good ideas, Valerie. Please re read the story and check punctuation, speech marks for dialogues and tenses. Use "your best friend" to check the past tenses of verbs, please! Miss Ale

VERY GOOD VALERIE!!!!! YOU WORKED HARD!!!! MISS ALE 16/4