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The gold coin

 

After seeing Clarie's house you notice that in the paper it said Margaret,and that Margaret is a flower and that Mr. Terry had talked about that; if he found the coins he would go to Hawaii for Valentines day. You start investigating and you see Mr. Terry talking in his house to somebody. After a few days you go again to the Coin store and you find that in a corner there was something black you get it and it says "Agenda". You open it and where the name has to be, nothing is written. You start reading it and you find out that on Tuesday 18, March 1999, SO THAT'S THE FOLLOWING DAY at 9 0 clock pm she/he will have dinner with Mr.Chonv at the cafe. You don't know who he is  but you notice that the agenda was of a girl because Mr. Chonv was all with hearts. You decide not to tell Lary(your detective) about what you Have found and decide to go by yourself at 9 o clock to the cafe.

The next morning you go to Mr. Terry's house and you hear that her girlfriend is asking him to marry, Mr. Terry says yes but not so convinced. At night you go to the cafe and you wait until Mr. Chonv and she come. At last you see two persons entering the cafe tand they sit in a very separate table, you decide to go and try to listen sitting behind them. You go and hear that they would marry in a week. and that they would buy a mansion.

The next day you go to Mr. Terry's house and you recognise that her girlfriend was the same girl that was the day before in the cafe. So you decide to make a mini court in the coin store and invite Lary, Mr. Terry, his girlfriend and Mrs. Clarie. There you say that you found an agenda and by making some things she found WHOSE it was and what that person HAD planned. You tell Mr. Terry that her girlfriend is a thief and that she stole the gold coins. You also tell him that she is going to marry another man and with the money of the gold coins they will go far and have a mansion. After that the police caught Mr.Terry's girlfriend and Mr. Chonv. After that they got the gold coins and put them where they were before. Mr. Terry fallS in love with Lary and Lary with him so they married and you became one of the most famous persons in the world.

 

GOOD VICENTE! A GOOD DETECTIVE STORY TO SOLVE! RE READ AND CORRECT THE MISTAKES AND WRITE SOME OF THE IDEAS CLEARER. 30/03 MISS ALE

 

 GOOD VICENTE!! YOU MADE MADE A REAL EFFORT IN CORRECTING THE MISTAKES!!!!- MISS ALE 17/04

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